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In terms of composition, this is a good piece. The way the electronic kit fits with the rhythm and tone of the piece is quite logically chosen. I like the melodic creativity of the song and the solo definitely wasn't too much but not underwhelming (if you know what I mean). I can definitely appreciate the theory, and it's nice to hear some odd time signature in a song here for once (too much Animals As Leaders for me). The only reason I'm talking half of the points off is because of the lack of atmosphere and spaciousness in the song. It would've helped the song if you had some kind of synth or string ensemble playing, something that adds to the piece's tone without affecting the lead too much. That isn't necessarily an easy thing to do though especially with the limitations of MIDI.

Overall, good composition!

lucasasdf responds:

Thank you, I would like to say that my attempt at adding atmosphere was exemplified by the low Halo Pad in the back but I now know that it was not powerful enough to show itself in unison with the rest of the instruments. I will consider this for the future. Thanks for the feedback!

I liked the percussion and sound design, but the melody is still a bit wrenching to listen to.

GeometryDashMau5Kids responds:

Gracias :3
Aunque en la melodía fue improvisada, queria hacer una melodia feliz, pero luego me salio depresiva y triste. Y así que me gusto más esta melodia xD

Interesting. I enjoy the sound design. The drum loops could be a little cleaner although I do like your percussive choice at the beginning. Although it's experimental, the melody still isn't easy to listen to and doesn't have any catchiness. Again, what can I say, it's expiremental.

GeometryDashMau5Kids responds:

Jejeje xD, es que las intenciones son que mis canciones no sean fácil de digerir, pero si escuchar para poder sacar sus propias conclusiones y apreciar de mi trabajo ;)

Gracias por tu reseña :D

Very interesting melody, love the ambience. I think it should be shorter though.

GeometryDashMau5Kids responds:

Muchas gracias, amigo ^_^, aunque si hubiese sido mas corto, no hubiese sido satisfactorio del todo.

spook dx

GeometryDashMau5Kids responds:

xD thank friend :)

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VoltSpeedGames responds:

k its morth worth than your life

more ambient, work on the chords, they sound overvoiced

GeometryDashMau5Kids responds:

Okey and thank you :3

I like the melody! I think it would've sounded better if it had more synths and custom drums :3

GeometryDashMau5Kids responds:

OK :3

You shouldn't have uploaded this. The drop is painful and the part after that isn't on key. The person who scouted you was probably just some Geometry Dash fan who actually makes decent music unlike you.

SirHadoken responds:

It is impossible for any individual to jump into an extremely complicated program like FL Studio 12 and understand all of the concepts as fluently and as easily as someone who has used the program for nearly seven years, like Waterflame.
Of course, I'm going to screw up. I understand. This music isn't of the best quality it could've been, but I see it less of an unprofessional hurricane of mismatched sounds and more of a sign of progress.
And the one who scouted me was Karaplex. Yes, he does make good music, unlike me, but he at least understands that I'm not a musically gifted superhuman.
I appreciate that you took the time to write a review, and I promise you that I won't stay a bad music developer forever, but it is at this point that I must disagree with your way of thinking, with the thought in mind that it takes practice to achieve mastery, and one's practice should be seen as practice, and not be criticized to the degree of a professional work of art. If you do not fully understand or agree with these points, I strongly encourage you to download the demo version of FL Studio 12 and try it out for yourself.

Best Regards,
SH~

Meh, it's still like your other. Only two notes. You need major equalization on the two synths. Oh not to mention, you used only two synths. That makes this song feel a bit empty.

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